Can you tell me if this is a good poem and give me ways to improve??

no, your poem is amazing before i even read the "i was eager to get out of this depressing funeral!!" i knew and understood what your story was. the only thing i would change is to take out the line "i was eager to get out of this depressing funeral!!" because once people read that they may lose their sense of emotion being unlayered because yuo just blurted out the answer. other wise it's still an amazing piece of work.