Cna someone please read my history paragraph to see if it's good? 10 points?

Good- just a few things. First, usually the expression is "in" my ears, not "through my ears." Also, you use rapidly twice in the next two sentences. Either combine the two or change one. If you don't combine them, put a comma after church clothes. Next, I ume you mean "I did what I was told" but you forgot the "was." Get rid of the "all at once." Put Vikings in quotation marks and then start a new paragraph. Wrong use of there, it should be their. Comma after "crept tp the door." Gasp should be gasped. Cut the What in what I saw and just start the sentence I saw. Again, there should be there. Change the "I also saw" in the second half of that sentence to just a comma after legs (which is already there.) The expression is I cried OUT in terror, not I CRIED in terror. Put a me after discovered in the next sentence. Put "into" after "was clear and." Make sure Vikings is plural in the cheering sentence, and you might want to change cheering to celebrating. Lastly, change floated in the final sentence to something a bit more exciting, like stole down the river.