What do you think of my poem? Honest answers please <3?

I think Quantum is right. Why dont you try one of the more popular forms like the clic alternating rhyming quatrain, it is easy, and I'm sure you will enjoy doing it. Also, you can try the pantoum for this. Just a little research but stick to a meter. Of course all of these things arent mandatory but if you want a more organized presentation, try a form.